Poor Imp

From the sidelines. -Tov -- Is there such a thing as peace? Have you experienced it?

Ha. I didn't, right? -Tov I don't remember - it could have been years ago. -Piers A night ago, before the games and I laughed when Tov joked about them ...

Getting out wasn't the question. White-washed wall, steel, barred window - the angles turned in on his thoughts; as he drifted, they closed in. He woke, startled. Naturally, he could ...

Depends, right? Piers' vodka glass, er - always half empty. -Tov Bloody Hell, can't you ask a question straightforward? Like Tov - if a glass is either, it's from a ...

Hell. If I said yes, you could believe me. Da? -Tov With Tov, there's always a question...I guess no, didn't think I get away from that. -Piers -- Do you ...

Ha. Or would I say? Means no. Hell, ask for it if you talk, right? -Tov I wouldn't judge it; though sometimes I'm bloody stupid. -Piers No one's real weak ...

A girl. She forgot about the masks and stage-craft tricks. 'I'll be seeing you then'. That's all she got. -Franz ( Theatre ) The silver-smith, and he's mad as that ...

Ha. Er, hey - if my name was no one, right? Makes perfect sense. -- Tov

Hullo DragonKore and welcome to YWS -- all that that implies being good naturally. ^_^ It is, without a doubt, an excellent place for receiving feedback on writing. And disturb? ...

Sure. ...Clothes. Hey, I'm not stupid, right? Er, usually. -Tov Hell, old boots, brown jacket with its elbows filled with holes; buttoned shirt over a pullover - buttons falling out ...

Ha; er - serious question? Hell. 'Yob tvoyu mat', right? Works for everything...unless you don't like the reaction, da? -Tov -- Have a word you're particularly fond of?

'Lo Clau, Aside from the poem on the whole, your asterisked line ought to read either, 1) 'I neither sink, nor swim' or alternately, 2) ' I don't sink, don't ...

I deleted the double-post for you. ^_^ As to the story... You have a nice conversational tone, and so you keep a lighter note to a dark story. That's involving ...

I wake up. Unless I don't, right? Then I sleep. -Tov -- Do you sleep easily? Anywhere? If not, why?

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